Few words about my conversation with supreme power , here we go....
You gave me a name , lust and desires ,
Few I accomplished few I crave for;
On my way , I heard when you gave a call ,
Your tyrant ways , I swear
Your claims are bizarre
So are your names and
Various appearances for all ;
Like a slave I move on a slate path
And follow every word that you say
On my journey in the world
That you say you spin the way you want ;
Now when you say I am a Coluber
Lost in my name , lust and desires ,
And have moved away from "The Heaven "
That I seek in your arms !
Tell me who is to be blamed ,
When you claim that you are the creator of all ?
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The final two lines were really powerful....great
ReplyDeletethank u ritesh :)
DeleteA very beautiful composition. Keep writing!
ReplyDeletethank u fayaz :)
DeleteBeautiful poetry Alka!....epecially loved the last two lines!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful animated picture of nature...
thank u Valli :))
DeleteYou write well. It makes me ponder. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteWell knit words
ReplyDeleteWow! Great, Alka:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful composition...I am touched by these lines :-)
ReplyDelete"Like a slave I move on a slate path
And follow every word that you say
On my journey in the world
That you say you spin the way you want"
Great poem.
ReplyDeleteAfter a long time Alka--very thought provoking question at the end wow!!!
ReplyDeletethank u shonit :)
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