all i wanted was to wake up with some one by my side....some one to hold me,some one to stroke my hair.....before i opened my eyes.... some one who could share a pillow with me at night....some one to
share the laughter and the out burst when i cried.....life is lonely,without a soul by my side.....i wait for
tomorrow , the empty eyes look for some one to fill up hollow my heart...sound of laughter, that i haven't
heard for some time and wonder where has it gone....i go back in past...and hear my giggles when i was young.....myclimb up the tall trees....bare foot in play grounds,my chase behind the butterflies......my hands soaked with colours they left behind.......a bat on my shoulder,and play till the sun dived .....and the laughter is all i hear ......but why this lonely heart ,cant be filled up once again...why this emptiness.....the smallest of sound ,i wait for some one to knock at my door......i go back in my world of loneliness by my side ,when i hear the knock, at some one else's door......i searched the stars,when i came in to existence and came across the theory of dooms day when i was born.......don't try to convince me .....don't try to tell me...not to believe in stars.......just let it be,,let me write.....right or wrong .....my word are my friends who understand my emotions behind every word i write.....i am a fairy,at times a bird,some times i am in love with some one who does not exist.....i am grateful to the moment when God decided ,not to be miser and blessed me with expression through which I connect with you all . its my words right or wrong , is all i have to share my thoughts.
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well, it was hardly some minutes ago was reading ur new posts which i missed...n Lo...newest post already...wow...luv the pace of the writer in u... n abt UR WORDS...trying to find urself amongst the situation...my most fav ability is that u rightly link it to the HEART/ ur blog name
ReplyDelete"the best is trying to know urself"is best justified...
ReplyDeleteThis is emotional,very emotional and it also means to much, it's your and your deepest thought, as I see it.
ReplyDeleteelvira thank you for your consisten support and for your lovely comments..i just went through your comments on all the posts today morning and trust me your words just made my day..thank u soooooooo much:)
ReplyDeletemiss lego thank u sooooo much through my words you have seen straight through me:)
Hello Alka.
ReplyDeleteYour words resonate with me so much.
Before I met my beautiful wife, there was a time in my life when I felt exactly like this & my only companion was my romantic expressions of love poetry.
Yesterday (Sun 22), I celebrated 10 blissful years of marriage. I have everything I could ever ask for in life. I have my wife and my poetry. These are my priceless gifts that I have been entrusted with. Without them, there is no me.
I can feel your longing for someone to call your own, for companionship, for love. I feel the ache in your heart & it saddens me. The heart is the body's largest organ & has great capacity to love. Do not give up hope of finding love, Alka. Love knows no time, distance or season & comes knocking at your door when you least expect it or when you think any chance of love has been lost.
Your writing is profound & penned straight from the heart.
Thank you for sharing. I appreciated the anniversary wishes from you too.
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Hi Andy , you are abs right in reading my heart , though i dont intend to share my feelings but somehow they pour out the moment i start writing.Thank you so much for your comments i really appreciate your consistent support.
ReplyDeleteLovely and touching words.. subtle yet radiant .. paint a vivid picture of your emotions and strike a resonant chord. :)
ReplyDeleteAlkaji, its amazing how you touch so many emotions in so many people with one single post.
ReplyDelete"i wait for
tomorrow , .... my chase behind the butterflies......my hands soaked with colours they left behind"
This one stanza not only holds the hope of a bright tomorrow but also the sweet melancholy of the past. Once again a magical and wondeful post... Thanks for sharing.
right or wrong again is a big subject .. it depends on the perspective of the person :)
ReplyDeleteWhy the lonely heart cant be filled again I guess we are afraid to be hurt again .. I know as i have been there myself
love the way you write so subtly :)
Bikram's
whoisstoppingyou.itstheregrabit.
ReplyDeleteyou bet:-)Freedom to live, love and express.
ReplyDeletesweet post and after reading this post
ReplyDeletea memory of a person flashed in my mind
http://drivingwithpen.blogspot.com/
lovely writing .....u seem to speak out your heart ..grt work :)
ReplyDelete..loneliness is a facet of life ..we must enjy it coz dats makes way for a much fulfilling life in future:)
plz do read my poetry :
http://campbuzzz.blogspot.com/2012/01/anthem.html
raj thank u sooooooo much for ur kind words:)
ReplyDeletenuktaa thank u soo much for ur kind words and consistent support..really you dunno how much these comments mean to me..
bikram very well said lonely heart is act not scared to love again but is scared to get hurt again..thank u so much:)
anonymous whereeeee ????:p
sush well said:)
chirag thank u am glad you could relate to the post
saikat thank u so much i will definitely go thru ur poetry:)
and sooory for the late response everyone:(