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Wednesday, 14 March 2012

fire

                                                                                
I look at the daffodils and watch them  smile...I look at the flamboyant trees they have begun to touch the sky  .....I look at the dew gathered on leaves and realise , its onset of spring ....i close my eyes to feel the breeze so mild.
My gaze through the isle  leads me to empty wild and I realise..... you are no where , I lost you from my sights....... now when  I see every thing around me is on fire ....though empty inside but I feel so wild . 
 I  lost you , and now when am lonesome in awe inspiring spring  ..... .......I feel you should come back to me ....I wait for you in my dreams... I want you to hold me while I sleep....what an awesome feeling .
 I don't want to be deprived of this feel ...... I  feel so wild, with silence around me...when every thing around me seems to be on fire.
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15 comments:

  1. Alka your poems are so expressive BUT when will we see a happy one ?So much of sadness is not good for the soul .

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    1. yes indu , hope the day is not far away :)

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  2. I agree. Alka, as beautiful as your poems are we need to read a happy poem from you. :)

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    1. hi Akshay,i totally agree but its not in my hands its my state of mind that comes out here and hw r u keeping ,hope all is well with you...every time i see yr pic in my comment box cant stop thinking about your health.

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    2. Thank you so much for your concern Alka. Your wishes gives me strength. Its been 10 days since my operation, doing fine now. Still on a wheelchair, will take a couple more weeks before I can start walking again. :)

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  3. awesome poem :) :) :) the feeling is great :)

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  4. Cant help but agree with the comments above.
    Here is to happier times that is to come. Cheers :)

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    1. thank you zach...i m sure happier times will come and stay :)

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  5. The arrows of Kamdev, herald the spring, so why loneliness!

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  6. You are fiery Alka...even your pen fires!

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  7. awsome lines Alka, I can feel the passion behind this :) :)

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  8. Venting out through words is certainly an art... and, u seem to have perfected it... ;)

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