Few lines on loneliness
On a gloomy road all alone ,
In a shroud of hope ,
Along with my shadow ,
Who lay prostrate on the road,
I told her to come along,
Don't give up, don't leave me alone ,
I can see some golden dust ,
I am sure
We are close to an Oasis "
She refused to hear one word , I told ,
She lay back like a rock beside the road,
She muttered " You are blind ,
You can see no more beyond
The ring of desires ,
Now leave me alone ,
Move on ,on your own ,
I wonder ,
What makes you so sure ,
You will reach El Dorado ,
And find a Holy grail
The day you find an Anon
On this anonymous road
That leads to unknown world
I will follow if I am alive
If I am there !
copy right (c)alka narula
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Nice one! Can I point out a small mistake though? It should have been prostrate, not prostate; which is actually a gland found in males ;) But excellent poem, I loved the play with words.. as usual :)
ReplyDeletethank u fr pointing out ,it ws a typing mistake ,corrected it ..thank u sooo mch :) @purple mist,
ReplyDeletewow!...so very beautiful again!
ReplyDeletethnx amit :)
Deleteवाह वाह
ReplyDeleteअब तो तारीफ के लिए स्गब्द कम पड़ने लगे है अल्का जी
thnx shashi :)
Delete:) lovely poem
ReplyDeleteEl darado is also a beautiful movie :)
Bikram's
yeah i knw ..thnx bikram:)
DeleteAbsolutely amazing piece of work.
ReplyDeletethank u shalu :)
DeleteAlka you excel yourself with every new poem-loved it !
ReplyDeletethank u indu :)
DeleteBeautiful!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanx ranita
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