JEDIKA COMMENTS - "Absolutely wonderful!!! I'm soo happy to have come across you by accident awhile back to have found myself curious enough to wanna revisit, and im happy my curiosity hadnt given up on pulling me back a few times too reconizing why id liked your blog & post soo much, when i was very young id had been in a severe accident leaving me a might slow upon comprehention it takes me soo much to learn curtain things or understand them when reading is involved,,, as ironic as it maybe or sound ive hadnt any proplems in reading or understanding what your sooo rightfuly gifted in thats awesome too me it touches my heart in knowing your gift hagivenmuchmeaning,tyou soo much "
Jedika is that your real name ?
Does it mean a wave ?
No, I think it means a ray !
Now don't fray ,
Have no desire to affray ,
Theres nothing in a name,
But I could see your colour through your name ,
You are fluorescent ,
I feel you have deep sense of melody ,
As your words sounded like a refrain ,
Cant see you but my vision says ,
You have a smile on your face ,
Don't be surprised ,
If I told you,
While you go through these lines ,
The expression on your face !
Am glad you came ,
And wish that you come back again ,
The only desire I have ,
How can I be your strength ?
Would appreciate ,
If you could narrate.
copy right (c)alka narula
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Its always wonderful to see two great minds meet, they seem so alike in conviction and conception, The sheer chemistry that's is being brewed is mind-boggling often leaving one flabbergasted. And this poem and its every line stands testimonial to the this.
ReplyDeleteMiris! magna opus!
Rupertt Wind
thank u rupertt :)
DeleteWow Alka, My respect for you has jumped by leaps and bounds after seeing this. SO very nice of you. :)
ReplyDeletethank u jaish :)
DeleteJust wanna say, that with this gesture of your's, you have flickered a thousands of minds with new rays of love & hope…
ReplyDeletethank u vaishali :)
DeleteWow.. Good one , such a lovely gesture .. loved the poem as always
ReplyDeleteBikram's
thank u bikram :)
Deletewow ... loved the poem ... hats off to you
ReplyDeletethank u TTT :)
DeleteBrillaint....
ReplyDeletethank u vikram :)
DeleteThat's a lovely gesture. :)
ReplyDeletethank u D.Nambir:)
Deletewow .. it must have got jedika off-guard ..
ReplyDeletebrilliantly written !
thank u rahul :)
Deletewow...so lovely:)
ReplyDeletethank u elli :)
Deletehumble bow to you alka
ReplyDeletethats v sweet of u sathish :)
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