Blown with another gale,
Am scared , want no tears ,
Not again...
Am in love , you know
Am not a game , I only
want some nectar that smells
of you once again....
When you came , you said
You are going to heal my heart ,
You will come back again .....
On a tree top,
With broken heart in deep pain,
I wait for you to grace my life ,
Pick up the threads, rebuild my nest ,
Embellish it with your breath
Once again......
copyright (c) alka narula
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u wrote a masterpiece...Once again... :)
ReplyDeletethank you cynosure :)
Deleteअद्भुत कविता मंत्रमुग्ध हो गया मै तो
ReplyDeletethank u shashi :)
Deletewhat inspires you?
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Deletelovely :)
ReplyDeleteyou are a store house of emotions ,dats flows out incessantly through such lovely poetry of yours :)
thank u saikat :)
Deletethat what life is mam, we win some we lose some .. rebuild all again
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry Alka :-)
ReplyDeletethank u paru :)
Deletepick up the threads , rebuild my nest... what a lovely weave of words, Alka!
ReplyDeletethank u rahul :)
Deleteloved the last 3 lines the best!
ReplyDeletethank u magic eye :)
DeleteFascinating poetry! Emotionally brilliant!
ReplyDeletethank u raj :)
DeleteShe does seem as if she's in deep pain, nicely expressed.
ReplyDeletethank u shalu :)
DeleteYour words flow so beautifully Alka, as always :)
ReplyDeletethank u jaish :)
DeleteNicely written! The ray of hope that shines!
ReplyDeletethank u danny :)
Deletebeautiful alka........nicely done.
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thank u anu :)
DeleteSo true of life -- amazing poetry!
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Very nice.
ReplyDeletethank u rajesh :)
Deletejust one word .. WOW...
ReplyDeletehow do you write such beautiful poems !
thank u sooooo mch rahul...well i pour out my feelings xactly d way am feling at that v moment :)
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